Gogarty had a genius for scabrous, outrageous verse. He wrote
Jesus after Joyce had moved out of the tower and sent
it to him for Christmas 1904. Ellmann speculates that his gift
was meant as a peace offering after their
fall break-up. Joyce reciprocated the sentiment, it
would seem, when he took parts of this satirical poem and put
them in Mulligan's mouth on the morning of June 16, forming
the comical high point of Telemachus. Ellmann
reproduces Gogarty's poem in its entirety (206).
In Telemachus, Mulligan recites stanzas 1, 2, and 9
of the poem’s nine quatrains, the last being somewhat revised
from the original. Of these editorial choices, it may be said
that Joyce represented Gogarty at his best. Stanzas 1, 2, and
9 are by far the funniest, and where 9 is uninspired
(“Goodbye, now, goodbye, you are sure to be fed / You will
come on My Grave when I rise from the dead”) Joyce did a
creditable job of improving it (“Goodbye, now,
goodbye. Write down all I said / And tell Tom, Dick and
Harry I rose from the dead”). He also identified
two good lines in stanza 3 and, rather than leave them out,
found an occasion to use them later in the book. In Circe,
King Edward VII appears “in the garb and with the halo of
Joking Jesus” and speaks these lines verbatim: “My
methods are new and are causing surprise. / To make the
blind see I throw dust in their eyes.”
Gogarty wrote more serious poems as well, publishing six
books of verse in the course of his life. He gained some
repute as a great poet when W. B. Yeats selected a large
number of his lyrics for the Oxford Book of Modern Verse
1892-1935 (1936) and praised him in the introduction.
Like many of his poems, both serious and outrageous, Jesus
has moments of real brilliance but is uneven.